<non-pony><original>Split Feelings - Griffinilla ft. Bloo

[Bloo]

Oi guys I did a thing. Lemme know what you think?

[DJ Skrudge]

Well. I really really enjoyed this song! Your voice is really smooth and on pitch, in time, the melody is infectious and the rhythm had me bobbing my head and smiling. Really great stuff here,

If there was one flaw I'd have to pick out, it'd be that the mix seemed a little bit.. muddy/fuzzy in the lower end? I'm not sure if that was intentional for a more acoustic feel to the drums or whatever, or maybe it was just my earphones, but I think some extra attention could have been paid to the mix there. But yeah, as a closing remark, before I read the tags I thought the vox were from one of the voice actresses and this was a Littlest Pet Shop remix (I don't watch LPS haha). What I'm trying to say is that your recording sounded professional and the composition was good enough that I thought it was from a tv show soundtrack! Keep up the great work!

[Guthey]

First off, I compliment you on your voice, second, that autotune... *shiver*. I just think autotune ruins the initial voice. Anyways, Since you're the singer, I guess I critique your singing. Well, I'm not a singer, so I don't know what to really say other than that your singing was pretty good, to me at least. And if you were trying to sound like snob, then I'd say you certainly knocked it out of the park, not to insult your voice if it just sounds like that. The way the actual music goes seems sort of strange, though. The beat seems a little off beat, maybe just a 1-2 step would suffice, the variation in the beat just seemed unnecessary. and the bass melody and guitar melody doesn't seem to fit the "groove," per-say, of the song. I'd actually stay to the higher end of the spectrum, rather than the low end. the song, to me, seems like a sort of popy type of song, so I think it should feel a little more cheery. I think the melody at :36 to its end should be the initial lead or groove to the song. Because, the beginning of the song sounds, like, normal, but then when the bassline comes in, it sort of takes a different feel like the song is going to go off in a different direction. I'm not too good with this genre, so that's kind of why I have trouble establishing my opinion.

[Injustrial]

I can't really hear anything wrong with the mix. I keep thinking that there's not enough bass, but then I realize I'm completely wrong. The vocals might be a bit sharp and could perhaps have been lowered a smidge, but that's really about it. The vocals are well done, the tune is catchy and the entire thing works well for me. The autotune is a love it or hate it thing. I'm personally not too fond of that kind of vocal effects, but I see what you're going for here.