<Pony><Cyber Industrial>Sweetie Bot *Finished*

[Injustrial]

So I've been toying about some new influences lately and it's starting to take shape. Very X-RX and early Noisuf-X, I feel. So far, I'm missing the melody for the Chorus (it's supposed to fit in there someplace) and something for a bridge inbetween stuff. If anyone has any ideas, I'd love to hear them, as this is a change of scenery for me.

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/breakbeats-and-lazors-wip

I'm also thinking of some more/different samples, but having a bit of trouble due to the BGM of the FiW episodes. Does anyone have any pure vocal stems with Sweetie Bot?

[PropellerEscape]

Okay I'm really enjoying this so far! The initial bassline is really interesting, and I like the little glitches and scream sounds in the background. Loving the hard kick as well!
I think the snare lacks punch, but it works well as an offbeat hit to give some rhythm. Also the middle section from about 1:30 becomes a little bit repetitive, but not so much that it's derogatory to the track.
I think the vocals would also sound unique if you tuned them to fit the key of the track at some points to give them a more carrying musical element.
Overall I'm really liking the track man; looking forward to hearing the full version!

[Injustrial]

Hey, thanks for your feedback!

I agree, it's a bit repetitive right now, I'm missing at least one layer to create a chorus. Also, there's going to be vocals in two forms here, to give it some changeups.

The snare issue is something I could look at. Perhaps compressing it slightly, EQ'ing it a bit different or do a different sound altogether. It's heavily distorted, so the hard punch is lacking a bit.

[Injustrial]

I've been adding and removing and changing things a bit now. I'm pretty much done with the instrumental, and plan on recording vocals when my lyrics are written.

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/breakbeats-and-lazors-wip

[Injustrial]

Vocals have been added

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/breakbeats-and-lazors-wip

I've been thinking of doing *something* with the EQ's and compression on the channels, but I'm not sure where I should start. Any suggestions?

[Injustrial]

And it is done. I think with the tools at hand and the skills I've currently got, this is as good as it could get. Hope you'll enjoy it!