<Original> Christmas Bash

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<Original> Christmas Bash

Postby Exiled Tenshi » 25 Dec 2013 03:51


Feedback would be splendid? Thank you.
Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays~
Happy New Year :3
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Re: <Original> Christmas Bash

Postby Injustrial » 25 Dec 2013 06:29

My biggest gripe would be that your drums are slightly boring to listen to. I understand that in certain genres, you want a homogenous drum-rhythm, but I tend to pay extra attention to the rhythmic parts of a song, rather than the melody.

That being said, you've got something good going on here. Some nice plucked strings, nice and warm pads and a very relaxed atmosphere. It does make me think of winter and snow, pulling on my nostalgia strings for old winter levels in classic video games. Perhaps a bit monotonous and one-dimensional, but what's there is good.

I can't really comment on the mix, since I'm at my folks and only have my cheap ass headset to listen from, but it seems generally ok. Nothing really stands out as too loud, at least. So perhaps some segments may be too quiet, but if so, I can't hear it
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