<pony><remix>JayB & Giggly Maria - Rain (Wisp Remix)

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<pony><remix>JayB & Giggly Maria - Rain (Wisp Remix)

Postby Wisp » 04 Oct 2013 08:48

With this remix I tried something new: big room/electro. I think it sounds pretty good, but feedback is always helpful :D
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Re: <pony><remix>JayB & Giggly Maria - Rain (Wisp Remix)

Postby DatWhackProducer » 04 Oct 2013 17:12

Little too much on the high end. 2:30 doesn't agree very well with the nice intro you had at the beginning, and thus the vocals that were in tune are not in tune. Goodness comes back ~3:38.

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Re: <pony><remix>JayB & Giggly Maria - Rain (Wisp Remix)

Postby Wisp » 04 Oct 2013 21:49

Yeah, some people have told me te drop doesn't go well with the rest of the song, but idk. To me, it seems to all go together nicely, but like I said, other people have told me it doesn't. I'm not sure if its the big room, the notes for the bass, or just something else.
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Re: <pony><remix>JayB & Giggly Maria - Rain (Wisp Remix)

Postby ph00tbag » 06 Oct 2013 19:42

I feel like the build at 2:15 just goes on waaaaay too long. Like, I'm ready to start dancing at 2:20, and it keeps going, and I've lost the drive by the time the beat kicks in. The second time through, it's more of the same, and I'm just bored by the time the kick drops back in.

I'm going to echo the sentiment that the drop feels kinda odd after that pretty intro. But I can see how it fits as a stylistic choice. I definitely kinda wince, though, when the pitch begins to shift during the vocal part. It just doesn't quite work for me.
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