<Pony><Original> "The Finished Spell" [Trance]

Website · by **BassRabbit** » 03 Oct 2013 10:04

Twilight has just completed Starswirl's spell. Let's party!

https://soundcloud.com/bass-rabbit/the-finished-spell

by **DatWhackProducer** » 04 Oct 2013 17:20

1:26 gets a little iffy on the composition. 2:20 bass note is a no-no for me, so is the treble note at 2:32/2:44. It gets a little repetitive, but I suppose that's something to expect from the genre you're working in, so this stylistic choice is okay; however, adjusting never hurts. Nice job, reminds me of mah yuth whn I wus a fan of ths music.

#zvt

http://www.youtube.com/user/applebukker · by **@ppleBukker** » 04 Oct 2013 18:14

I'm gonna let DWP's critique stay in place and comment on my findings.

First off, I'm really liking the stereo I'm finding in this track. The break at 3:30ish is a really nice touch. Great transition tool. Also, great use of dynamics. I love the bells I'm hearing around 5:25.

by **Captain Ironhelm** » 05 Oct 2013 08:55

I would recommend making the hand clap snappier/louder. As it is, it kind of is pushed in the background, and if that's intentional then ok.

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