[non-pony][Drum & Bass][original]Well of Souls

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[non-pony][Drum & Bass][original]Well of Souls

Postby ConfuciusTheorem » 01 Oct 2013 08:40

This is made in anticipation of Halloween coming up and stuff. My first crack at DnB

Criticism is appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/confuciustheorem/well-of-souls
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Re: [non-pony][Drum & Bass][original]Well of Souls

Postby Nexaka » 02 Oct 2013 22:36

Very spoopy :>

There's isn't a whole lot going on with this track but I'll try to hit a few of the main points:
The drums feel a bit too light and thin, especially the kick, it has virtually no low end at all. Try eqing or getting better samples perhaps.
Everything feels dry as theres no or hardly any reeverb on any of the instruments.
The piano really gave the spoopy feel for the song, but its thin and dry like the drums, same for the pads and the synths.

Composition wise, there's again, not a whole lot goin on, so keep working on that, vary it up a bit.

Keep up the good work! :)
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