<dubstep><WIP><dunno yet> untitled thing

[Ocular]

https://soundcloud.com/theocularinvisible/new-song-idea-thing
k so I know this is only 27 seconds but I want opinions pls

[Alycs]

This sounds like it could be amazing and I really think you should continue it. All the sounds in it sounds solid and well designed. The only thing I could say at this point is the way the arppegiated chords are structured at the moment seem really awkward. Some of the jumps you have don't balance with each other. Seeing as it seems like you're following a general pattern of [bass-note, three note arp in chord, three note melody] with slight variation, I'd try and make sure that you're following SATB harmony. At the moment, some of the intervals don't quite sound right. 0.08; 0.10; 0.17; 0.23 are the places it stood out the most to me.

I can't really give a full explanation of how to fix them as I have neither perfect pitch nor the midi file, but something about those places seemed a little off, just play around with the intervals and see what you can do. Overall it sounds amazing; definitely continue