Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

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Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 14 Nov 2011 22:50

Ill be honest, i bloody hate this. I'm not sure what direction to go from here. Any ideas?

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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Facade » 15 Nov 2011 06:41

loving the appregios though i feel like its missing something though i just cant put my finger on it :/
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 15 Nov 2011 07:14

Facade wrote:loving the appregios though i feel like its missing something though i just cant put my finger on it :/


My sentiments exactly... it just feels vacuous.
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 15 Nov 2011 07:52

I'm not an expert on electronic doohickies, but when listening to this, I kind of expected a ticking or hihat 'tss tss tss tss' to be in the background, alternating between left and right ear...it's difficult to explain, but maybe that will help?
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Facade » 15 Nov 2011 15:09

Dr_Dissonance wrote:I'm not an expert on electronic doohickies, but when listening to this, I kind of expected a ticking or hihat 'tss tss tss tss' to be in the background, alternating between left and right ear...it's difficult to explain, but maybe that will help?

that and a little more bass would sound real nice
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Calamus_Dash » 15 Nov 2011 16:01

I like the part from 2:14 onwards. Like facade said though, moar bass would be welcome :P
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 15 Nov 2011 21:25

Alright, more bass it is!
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Facade » 16 Nov 2011 07:14

jubian wrote:Alright, more bass it is!

dont forget the tss tss tss
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 16 Nov 2011 07:20

Facade wrote:dont forget the tss tss tss


I have no idea how to achieve that, with alternating pan :S
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 16 Nov 2011 07:22

New version (no fancy-ass high hats yet): http://www.mediafire.com/?7ooju349t8ho94c

Uploaded to mediafire by a friend, since my i've hit my internet cap and can't upload to soundcloud... hopefully he hasn't trolled me by uploading the wrong thing...
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby Mundius » 16 Nov 2011 09:06

If you're doing it with FL Studio, the instrument's leftmost knob (right beside volume which is beside the instrument) is the panning. Just add in the event for pan.
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 16 Nov 2011 15:18

Vinyl Scratch wrote:If you're doing it with FL Studio, the instrument's leftmost knob (right beside volume which is beside the instrument) is the panning. Just add in the event for pan.


Oh, thanks!
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Re: Untitled (I'm stuck for ideas)

Postby jubian » 17 Nov 2011 07:09

AAAHHHH I submitted it as a Toastbeard and forgot to add hi hats! D:
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