by vladnuke » 23 Aug 2013 11:56
sounds good, could use a little pitch correction and the voice could cut through a bit more, and at the end of each chorus, if you cut out the harmony it would be a bit clearer. the breathy pad that goes "shhhhhh" during the chorus muddles up the mix a lot cuz it takes up a lot of space. The kick could use a little more beef, and that's about it.
The actual composition is alright, and it overall is pretty good.