The Ponyborn Comes (Parody of "The Dragonborn Comes" Skyrim)

[Curtis Bodiker]

Hey guys! My name is Curtis :D This is a parody of "The Dragonborn Comes" from the Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim. For those of you who don't know, Fluttershy is the commonly accepted pony version of the Dragonborn, a great warrior who saved the world from the rebirth of dragons. It is a great game and I suggest you check it out! Your feedback on the music is always appreciated :D

Original Song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wr-buV4tYOA

The Game: http://www.elderscrolls.com/skyrim

Lyrics:

Our Hero, our Hero, claims the worlds kindest heart
I tell you, I tell you, the Ponyborn comes
With a stare wielding power of the ancient lost art
Believe, believe, the Ponyborn comes

It's an end to the choas of Equestria's foes
Beware, beware, the Ponyborn comes
For the Dischord has passed, and the Harmony grows
You'll know, you'll know, the Ponyborn's come

Flutterkiin, Flutterkiin,
There's no point in running.
Though she's shy, she will fly,
To protect all her friends.
With a hop, skip, and jump,
Every monster shall fall.
Flutterkiin, with a sqwee,
She will fight for us all.

-Curtis Bodiker

[Tasorrog]

I really liked it :D
Nice lyrics and you have a good voice, just to give you some feedback.
Try making some slight eqing just to get rid of the breeding/klicking sound, and the reverb in the end was a little to high compared to the rest.

Acapella? For remixing ;p

[Curtis Bodiker]

I really liked it :D
Nice lyrics and you have a good voice, just to give you some feedback.
Try making some slight eqing just to get rid of the breeding/klicking sound, and the reverb in the end was a little to high compared to the rest.

Acapella? For remixing ;p

Thanks for the feedback, I aprecated it :D At the end I was trying to get that echo sound they get when they do the "Sons of Skyrim" but I agree that it came out a bit too high. I will go back and edit this someday :D