by DerpyGrooves » 16 Aug 2013 01:16
Good work for a n00b. Just tighten up your structure some. When I listen to house, I normally want to hear exactly 8 bars of something, then 8 bars of something else and so on ad-infinitum from a structural standpoint. It seems like you sort of float from idea to idea in a way that would be confusing and distracting on a dance floor.
Good sense of melody tho. Quite swish.
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