泉水流出山基地 <nonpony> <original> <ambient>

[fatcat44101]

yes, the title is in Chinese, lol. it translates to Spring Water that Runs Through the Mountain.
Its been awhile since ive posted anything on my little remix, so I thought i'd throw my latest track out there and see what you bronies and pegasisters though. I haven't done any remixes to any pony tracks yet, but im a huge fan and I wanna be apart of this awesome community !

https://soundcloud.com/fatcat44101/spring-water-that-runs-through

i'd love some feedback on this track ^^ in the mean time, i'll work on making a pony track.

thanks!

[vladnuke]

p cool, good track, nice atmosphere, kinda reminds me of Owl City if they didn't have vocals.

[fatcat44101]

thank you so much for the feedback ^^ im glad you liked it.

[CDPP]

Pretty nice track, its 'like you remixed one of those buddhist mediation CDs lol. Lovethe touch with the birds and weather sounds, that's just great.

[ph00tbag]

I'm not sure about the translation on that title. My understanding of Chinese yields the translation, "Spring Water flows from the base of the mountain," which is close, but not exactly the same thing. If I may offer an alternative, 经山泉水 may be more what you're looking for. It literally means "spring water that passes through the mountain." Moreover, it actually sounds very literary in the Chinese, having a four character structure, reflecting idiomatic expression.

The tune itself is pretty good, though. I don't really hear any problems.
Yum, sounds like you're cookin' up some bacon. (Rain sound effects happen to sound very similar to the operation of a frying pan.

[CDPP]

Yeah what ph00t said. Or you could be all edgy and put a comma in the middle and it'll be a 谚语.

[fatcat44101]

im far from being Chinese, but i have a friend that is. She's the one that came up with the name, due to my song inspiring her to draw the songs artwork. Either way, i appreciate the feedback on the song ^^. This is by far my favorite song ive composed.

If any of you have any ideas / tips on how i could improve this piece or improve my later productions, i'd love the feedback. I'm always looking to improve my music.

Hopefully i can make something pony related eventually :P Thanks again!

[Facade]

pretty awesome! good work

[fatcat44101]

thanks ^^ i'm glad you enjoyed it