<non-pony><Chiptune><traditional japanese> A Byte of Japan

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<non-pony><Chiptune><traditional japanese> A Byte of Japan

Postby konsolN » 07 Aug 2013 14:00

https://soundcloud.com/konsoln/a-byte-of-japan

I haven't posted anything here in almost a year, sorry, it was mostly because my music is just mostly non-MLP anything.

ABOUT THE SONG
It's in C, in the scale "Japan in Zen" was planned to be a Chiptune, but I ended up using Koto Shimasen and Shakuhachi with the Timemachine VST to give it a 8-bit sampled sound.

No generall melody behind it, I just wanted it to sound japanese and so I used sound patterns I heard in other songs over time.

What do you think about it? Listenable? are the breaks ok? Do the sound of the instruments fit together? Do you miss anything? Too much inconcistency?
I make different kinds of music, often get told that It sounds like something for a Video Game because I make only instrumentals, never had a chance to make music for an actual game. I would love to.

http://soundcloud.com/konsoln

Or visit me, will be on BronyState for some time to come.
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Re: <non-pony><Chiptune><traditional japanese> A Byte of Jap

Postby vladnuke » 08 Aug 2013 09:58

the re-sampled stuff should've been paired with some classic 8-bit kicks and snares, the non-re-sampled elements should have been given the same treatment (or at least have something leading in to them). Otherwise yeah pretty good could go for like a weird indie game or smth
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Re: <non-pony><Chiptune><traditional japanese> A Byte of Jap

Postby konsolN » 12 Aug 2013 11:27

Thank you for the feedback. Yeah I suppose keeping seperate Segments for the 8-Bit Stuff and the tradutional Stuff would have made more sense.

I really should get into a Team for a Game, I really get that a lot "I could imagine this in the background forq some game"
I make different kinds of music, often get told that It sounds like something for a Video Game because I make only instrumentals, never had a chance to make music for an actual game. I would love to.

http://soundcloud.com/konsoln

Or visit me, will be on BronyState for some time to come.
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Re: <non-pony><Chiptune><traditional japanese> A Byte of Jap

Postby Facade » 12 Aug 2013 11:49

sounds very video game esque!

good jorb
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