<Pony><Electro House>Rainbow Factory Remix

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<Pony><Electro House>Rainbow Factory Remix

Postby Mr.Afrox » 03 Aug 2013 13:11

https://soundcloud.com/afrox-jones-mr-afrox/rainbow-factory-hard-electro

A remix i made of rainbow factory in less than 2 hours would love some honest feedback ,and as always i love all of you and hope you enjoy this as much as i did making it :D
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Re: <Pony><Electro House>Rainbow Factory Remix

Postby Conchetupony » 03 Aug 2013 15:45

Has some potential, but some big issues: the biggest one is that the voice samples are off tune with the rest of the music, e.g at 0:24, 2:20 the samples are in F# minor and the chord being played is G#m. At 0:37 and 1:06, the sample is in C#m.

The sample sounds a bit odd when played repeatedly at 0:30 and 2:28, you left too much of that first 'R' on the spliced sample. Add a very short fade in, or cut a little at the beginning of the sample.

Keep improving c:
oops I dropped the bass

will you pick it up for me
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Re: <Pony><Electro House>Rainbow Factory Remix

Postby Mr.Afrox » 04 Aug 2013 14:35

Love your reviews bro :3 honest as awsomeness thanks bro i will surely remember that and yup the samples werent in good sync , i surely will keep improving /)
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Re: <Pony><Electro House>Rainbow Factory Remix

Postby S.P.P » 06 Aug 2013 18:22

Yeah, as has been said the vocals are out of tune, which is the main issue with it. I'd suggest changing up the tune at that point, or shifting the pitch of the vocal sample.

Other than that though, this is great. Nice sound design and the drop is pretty killer.
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