<NONPONY> <REMIX> Melting Pot of Alcohol SimLatina Remix

[SimLatina]

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/alex-s-melting-pot-of-alcohol


I worked really hard on this, feedback pls?

[Conchetupony]

Lovely synth sounds and melodies. The bass sounds a bit odd to me, though. Too harsh for my taste.

[Viricide Filly]

The...whole thing sounded like a mish mash pile on of everything...INCLUDING the kitchen sink.
The drop, was that actually a drop? Couldn't hear the vocals at all. Everything sounded like preset synths, just badly used unlike others who use them. I literally couldn't listen past the halfway mark. Would rather listen to the person you obviously ripped your name off from (And even HE'S pretty bad)

[SimLatina]

excuse you I spent time and effort into making this track if you're going to hate on it at least do so constructively rather than going on a biased rant about your own personal spite for a musician whom i frankly quite adore. Also i checked you don't even have a soundcloud how dare you judge me you're just like the rest of the english people always cynical and aloof

[Viricide Filly]

Edit: Well played.

[SimLatina]

Edit : I saw what you wrote before you angry little irish shit

[Viricide Filly]

I will find you and I will give you a glasgow smile I bet you can't even down a hundred pints of pure alcohol you lightweight pussy I will end you and all that is you

[Nine Volt]

Ok guys.

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/alex-s-melting-pot-of-alcohol


I worked really hard on this, feedback pls?

At the beginning there's some sort of pluck thing that's like lowpassed or something and it's kinda annoying. The lead sounds really overcompressed but the melody is fine.

The bass doesn't really fit with the song; it's both too loud and too harsh. I think it's going down too far and the waveform is getting thrashed or something. Also it's not really sidechained.

The vocoded vocals are too loud when they're introduced but get too quiet. The vocals in general except for the one before the first drop and the one at the end are too quiet.

I like that second melody that comes in.

When the drop comes in it's kinda just a mishmash of everything. I can barely hear the drums (sidechain a lot moar; they've been playing the same thing for the entire song and it's boring). I don't really hear a sub (but that may be because I'm listening on earbuds (my actual headphones are inaccessible at the moment)).

The second drop has that square pluck synth playing some dissonant notes. Other than that I think it's too similar to the first drop.

Overall: You really need to work on your mixing, and sidechain everything to the kick except the snare (and sidechain to the snare, but a lot lighter than the kick). That includes your hats and cymbals and such. I think you should also work on making everything fit together rather than throwing anything that sounds cool into the track, as the synths don't always fit together. If those are presets, you should work on making your own patches that you're happy with.

[Viricide Filly]

You do realise, Nine, this is a troll account, right?

[Nine Volt]

You do realise, Nine, this is a troll account, right?

Yup.

I was there when he did his intro thread :3

[SimLatina]

Thanks for the feedback; at least someone knows how to go with the flow and be a good contributor to the thread unlike a certain scottish killjoy "know-it-all" with a terrible OC and egocentric mannerisms

Thanks Nine!