<Pony><Original> Crazy Awesome (Dubstep/Glitch)

[FHaze]

Just found this forum, looking forward for staying in this community.
here is a pony dubstep/glitch music I did today:

https://soundcloud.com/fhaze7/crazy-awesome

feedback appreciated.

Sorry for my bad english

[Nine Volt]

You seem to be missing a sub bass in most/all of this.
Other than that it's pretty well designed, a little simplistic though.

[FHaze]

thanks for the feedback Nine Volt, I'll check that sub bass issue you mentioned, I am still learning a lot of stuff by my own, having feedback like this really help me. thanks.

edit:Actually, I used a highpass on the master channel of this song (on all the time), you see any problem with that? I just can't hear the difference, maybe the sub bass is just not loud enough?

[Genkar]

The track seems relatively well made, I would recommend using sounds that fit better together though. The downpitch laser, the lead, and the modulated bass all sound incredibly different, so when it jumps from one sound to the next, it sounds a bit sloppy. Composition isn't half bad though.

The other thing I would think is worth mentioning is like 9V said, the lack of sub bass. Having a highpass on the master isn't good, that will cut literally all the low frequencies in the track away completely, so I have to ask, what headphones/speakers are you using to produce? Sub bass doesn't really come through on most earbuds or cheap speakers, which could be why you're not noticing the difference from the highpass.

[FHaze]

The track seems relatively well made, I would recommend using sounds that fit better together though. The downpitch laser, the lead, and the modulated bass all sound incredibly different, so when it jumps from one sound to the next, it sounds a bit sloppy. Composition isn't half bad though.

The other thing I would think is worth mentioning is like 9V said, the lack of sub bass. Having a highpass on the master isn't good, that will cut literally all the low frequencies in the track away completely, so I have to ask, what headphones/speakers are you using to produce? Sub bass doesn't really come through on most earbuds or cheap speakers, which could be why you're not noticing the difference from the highpass.

Serious they all sound incredibly different? well... my sound design is not the best and my library is very short for now, still learning a lot as I said before, but I'll improve that from time.

That sub bass problem is really worrying me now, I'll check that more deeply today. My headphone is a cheap Sony MDR-V55, but I already ordered a Monster Beats Studio (sensing people blaming me). Also I don't have a monitor speaker, just a gamer Logitech 2.1 250W RMS speaker.