[non poni]{Electronic} Grand Galloping Beat

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[non poni]{Electronic} Grand Galloping Beat

Postby Facade » 13 Jul 2013 07:25

aha im having a productive day! just finished this one up after working on the dark ambient song!

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what if facade did woodentoaster/livingtombstone stuff? idk it would probably sound a lot like this

https://soundcloud.com/facade-of-ages/grand-galloping-beat
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: [non poni]{Electronic} Grand Galloping Beat

Postby Pulse » 13 Jul 2013 19:23

Pretty good. I just have a few things to nit-pick about.

The triplet kicks at 0:44 feel dreadfully out of place.
While it's not ruining the track, it feels like the mix is changing flow a lot (like I heard trance, electro-house, drum n' bass).
It feels a bit empty, and that may have something to do with the flow. Some more reverb or maybe a pad would do the trick.

Nice work!
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Re: [non poni]{Electronic} Grand Galloping Beat

Postby Facade » 13 Jul 2013 19:41

thanks!
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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DerpyGrooves wrote:The secret to a good song has everything to do with the relationship of the verse and the chorus to one another


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