<pony><trance>Swiftone - Dance in the lightmoon

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<pony><trance>Swiftone - Dance in the lightmoon

Postby Swift » 04 Jul 2013 14:17

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T2EhTkZ_KlM

a new track :) hope to like it xD
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Re: <pony><trance>Swiftone - Dance in the lightmoon

Postby Pulse » 04 Jul 2013 15:45

That was very nice; it was chill and relaxing. Totally digging it.

Just a few things I want to offer back to you:
It felt pretty repetitive. It's really easy to just zone out and "hear" the music without actually LISTENING. As pretty as the piano melody was, it got repetitive really quickly.
The track as a whole sounded somewhat muddy (though, that may just be me). A little bit of EQ'ing in the mastering or on sounds to remove over-lapping frequencies could help that out.
The kick didn't pull through very easily; it could have used a more powerful click to make it a bit more apparent. The lower frequencies were most of what I heard if I listened for the kick.

Overall, it was a very nice trance track, melodically pleasing, and smooth. Just a few rough edges in there. Good work! :D
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