I love how the lead synth is doing a lot of panning without being distracting; it definitely fit the atmosphere of the track.
The vocal snippets you used in the beginning could use a little more presence; they felt as if Trixie were a good distance away (which may have been what you were going for). Twilight/Spike sounded fine.
I like that arp that comes in at 4:00; it was airy and dreamy, yet retained the tension that you had established in the track.
I would have utilized that clap (snap?) that you used throughout the track a little more. It really releases some tension and the drum loop feels complete. It also works well to add variety (though minimal) and keep the pacing.
Overall, that was awesome. Totally loved it!
