<pony><electronic> Wonder

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<pony><electronic> Wonder

Postby DatWhackProducer » 30 Jun 2013 03:46

Flipping Kreühn Pöny, Using Double Illegal Isht, And Venturing Into Electronic

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Re: <pony><electronic> Wonder

Postby Mr. Bigglesworth » 01 Jul 2013 07:40

I'm sorry dude, this is outright awkward to listen to...
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Re: <pony><electronic> Wonder

Postby Pulse » 01 Jul 2013 17:29

I have to agree with Sir Bigglesworth; it grows on you a little, but not enough to make it a comfortable listening experience.

The kick and snare are the main focus when it comes to keeping time, and while the kick is on each beat, it gets thrown off by the snare. They should really be on the same timing. And speaking of the kick, that thing is way to big/loud for the track; bring it down or cut off some of that tail.
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Re: <pony><electronic> Wonder

Postby VaporBlaze » 04 Jul 2013 10:10

Ditto Bigglesworth, I really have no idea what to make of this. It's not a song. It's not all that interesting to listen to, just a drum and some (quiet) low bit sounding synth doing something. What was your intent with this? What is it supposed to be?
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Re: <pony><electronic> Wonder

Postby Nine Volt » 04 Jul 2013 10:42

What are you even trying to do...?

I don't get it.
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