I have to agree with Sir Bigglesworth; it grows on you a little, but not enough to make it a comfortable listening experience.
The kick and snare are the main focus when it comes to keeping time, and while the kick is on each beat, it gets thrown off by the snare. They should really be on the same timing. And speaking of the kick, that thing is way to big/loud for the track; bring it down or cut off some of that tail.
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Ditto Bigglesworth, I really have no idea what to make of this. It's not a song. It's not all that interesting to listen to, just a drum and some (quiet) low bit sounding synth doing something. What was your intent with this? What is it supposed to be?