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Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby SimLatina » 25 Jun 2013 17:37

Discount kitchens In UK haha no now that I have your attention:
Hi all, I'm a new brony musciian, just joined the fandom last week and thought I'd post my music here!

You can hear a WIP here, I'd love to get some feedback too :)

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/passion-preview

Brohoof! /)
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Nine Volt » 25 Jun 2013 17:45

um

Ok.

Interesting soundcloud name, to say the least...
And did you basically just steal Sim Gretina's name? It'd be funnier if you made Latin music :3

And that song, my god... it's perfect! 11/10 would fuck again
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby SimLatina » 25 Jun 2013 17:58

Thanks, I try my best!

I did make a latinish track a while back, mind giving some feedback?

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/trixies-trix-simlatina-remix
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Mr.Afrox » 26 Jun 2013 13:28

this is a great i love the latin feel,its all sunny and great feels awsome for summer
it brings great interest to me how everything is built great song bro /)
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Conchetupony » 26 Jun 2013 16:44

I gotta say, you caught me with the title. >.>

The song is nice, though the pony samples ("yay", "louder") and that horn sample being used as an instrument get on my nerves, to say the least. :/
oops I dropped the bass

will you pick it up for me
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Nine Volt » 26 Jun 2013 16:52

Take a look at his soundcloud name or any of the rest of his songs on soundcloud. I highly, highly doubt he is being serious :3
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby SimLatina » 26 Jun 2013 17:30

I'm sorry, but what made you think I wasn't serious? I actually spent time and effort making those tracks, if you're going to make fun of me at least give me some constructive criticism.

Also, new track this time. If you're going to take a jab at me at least do it objectively.

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/i-playboy-like-a-gameboy-wip
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Nine Volt » 26 Jun 2013 17:36

Ok, now I really can't tell if you're serious. If you are, then I'm sorry because I assumed so due to the fact that your Soundcloud name is fucking "Sobbing Rectum". Sorry, but that doesn't scream "I'm serious and I make serious music". Regardless, I was not trying to take a jab at you, so sorry if it seemed that way.

And anyway, 'not serious' =/= 'doesn't try'.

I still like your music :3
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby SimLatina » 26 Jun 2013 17:49

Fine, I'll take that into consideration. I'll think of a better name probably. In the mean time I'll just be uploading my WIPs here for feedback

https://soundcloud.com/bonerfart/omnipony-pewdiepie-sobbing
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Nine Volt » 26 Jun 2013 17:51

No, no, it's a fine name (and it's funny), it just doesn't scream of seriousness. To me it sounds like a troll name, honestly. No hard feelings?

Also, I'd suggest you get a Discography page if you're going to be continually posting new stuff
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Freewave » 26 Jun 2013 18:19

and use a real thread title like everyone else in this forum does.
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby SimLatina » 26 Jun 2013 18:40

Okay, sorry for the confusion. how is my music?
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby itroitnyah » 26 Jun 2013 20:47

I can't say I'm really impressed by your music in the OP. I'm not quite sure what it is, but the um, synth thingy over the bassline, it's overpowering. The pluck at the beginning is as well. Or at least, imo. They could be toned down some so that they're leading the song, but not leaving everything else behind. Also, the lead synth over the bassdrop sounds very awkwardly placed on top of it. Everything in the bass drop sounds very awkward together.
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Re: Discount Kitchens in UK

Postby Captain Ironhelm » 26 Jun 2013 20:48

i dig that first-preset-when-you-first-boot-up sylenth sound that comes in at 37 seconds, and

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