<non-pony><Life><Dubstep>Awakenings(NostalgiaStep)

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<non-pony><Life><Dubstep>Awakenings(NostalgiaStep)

Postby Mr.Afrox » 23 Jun 2013 14:02

(NG Exclusive)
In this song reflecting bad memories and putting out our feelings
and heart in the manliest of ways to show people how to fight their
fears be ready for a bass pumping thrill ride,Be sure to keep all hands in the vehicle while listening :D

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/540260
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Re: <non-pony><Life><Dubstep>Awakenings(NostalgiaStep)

Postby PropellerEscape » 23 Jun 2013 14:39

This is really nice, especially the intro.
However, the kick's sidechaining needs to be a lot less noticeable, so it doesn't just cut the volume so harshly.
That white noise downlifter before the drop is a bit sudden and harsh, so you can EQ the higher frequencies to make it bit softer.
Again, when it drops the drums are drowned out by the bassline, so you need to EQ the very lowest frequencies a little bit, lower the volume and maybe do some more slight sidechaining.
Also, do you have a limiter on the master track? Everything is changing in volume constantly and it keeps dipping.
At 3:30, that mid-range bass is really muddy, and needs a volume boost and some EQing to give it some room to be heard and not drowned out.
This is a solid track, the only problems are with mixing.
Keep it up though!
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Re: <non-pony><Life><Dubstep>Awakenings(NostalgiaStep)

Postby Mr.Afrox » 23 Jun 2013 14:46

Thanks again for the awsome tips and review :D
and yes i did have a limiter on the track
i need to take more time while i mix my tracks i may of rushed it abit XD

awsome reviews as always bro /)
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Re: <non-pony><Life><Dubstep>Awakenings(NostalgiaStep)

Postby PropellerEscape » 23 Jun 2013 14:58

You're welcome again! /)
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