children of the night (Luna)- royalpony (remix)<hardstyle>

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children of the night (Luna)- royalpony (remix)<hardstyle>

Postby royalpony5300 » 18 Jun 2013 03:59

RoyalPony (Qlimax)

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Re: children of the night (Luna)- royalpony (remix)<hardstyl

Postby remix panda » 18 Jun 2013 20:59

I'm not sure how this will come off as, but here goes nothing

The transition around 3:40 is a bit jarring—in fact, that whole section seems out of place in the song. It seems to me that some kind of filtered kick or beat would have made that section feel somewhat less out of place. The vocal "ooh"-ing around the three-minute mark would be a great little sample to use later on to further increase the homogeneity of the song. The sounds and instruments are great, but the song doesn't really feel like it goes anywhere.
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