<non pony><Chiptune> This is it for me. Not for you.

[Bendelsohn]

Alrighty gentlemen, first time making a chiptune. It turned out a bit more depressing than I expected, but I think it works. I sort of imagined the story behind this being a scene in a game where someone close to the main character sacrifices himself to save the main character's life.
This also works pretty well with rainy mood.

Feedback is heavily appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/bendelsohn/this-is-it-for-me-not-you

[KillerAmp]

okay umm, well I think its almost too simplistic for chiptune, I like the melodic ideas and stuff but the synths could use a bit of a decay and it could use more filtering, it feels a bit weird to the ear, so adding some more (subtle) low/high frequencies to make it more appealing yaknow? Good job so far tho.
I actually think you'd have a really nice acoustic/piano track right there if you converted it to keys

hope i helped