by Symphon » 26 Apr 2013 08:47
I'm not much of a listener to lo-fi, so I'm not entirely sure what it's supposed to sound like, so I'll try my best at critique.
The beat and percussion is nice and fits together well. However, the synths sounds just really harsh and scratchy. They don't hold much interesting as they're not only very rugged but also don't hold much attention. They're too dissonant with each other as well, and although the drums are sweet, they just don't match. Also, there's not much variety throughout the track when it comes to composition, i.e. the melody, chords, and bassline. Maybe introduce more instruments to attract the listener again and change the tune every now and then. Nice atmosphere though.