<Wip><non pony><reversed bass> Ocel-Fot: Unnamed Song2

[Ocels]

This is the work in progress of my second real song.

https://soundcloud.com/ocel-fot/wip-2

Suggestions and critique would be greatly appreciated.



Bad intro is bad great! horrible

[PED-X]

your lead instruments are a little off to me, they don't really sound cool they are a little more annoying :/
I like your use of a hardsyle-esq reverse bass, but I think your main kick needs to be more driving in order to capatalize
most of the song got pretty repetitivearound the middle
and holy crap
that last bit was amazing, it came out of nowhere, like the eruption of a good song that I did not want to stop xD