<original> <pony> <trance> Thanasia's Ballad

[Covide]

I made a song, and I feel like it's lacking and stuff. I don't spend too much time doing this kind of music, so it took me a while to make (aka I'm a lazy douche). Anyway, i kinda drew a blank on what to do for the breakdown, so that's why it's like that. Is there anything I should fix? Maybe add something? idk, any critisism is appreciated.

[Mesogears]

I know you see it as lacking, but I think I this has potential. I definitely enjoy the "chillness" of this track.

However, the lead synth gets pretty loud at 1:45 onward, to the point of drowning out the drums. Speaking of drums, you also might want to put a little variation of them every once and a while.

[ph00tbag]

You could also stand to have a bass line, just to establish a bit more of a rhythm.