[ Arrange ] [ Shoegaze ] Lower the Moon (WIP)

[Luna's Navel]

https://soundcloud.com/jetpacktravelers/lunas-navel-lower-the-moon

Another WIP for the upcoming album. Funny thing is I changed the ending a few hours after I uploaded this

Feedback is appreciated as always.

[ghelded_kultz]

I am already loving this song. Not much to say other than mix the drums louder. Also the ending is a little strange and doesn't fit well with the rest of the song, but you changed that already so we'll see what it is like next time.

I'm inspired to finish up the shoegaze/noisegaze song I've been sitting on for the last month now.

[Luna's Navel]

I am already loving this song. Not much to say other than mix the drums louder. Also the ending is a little strange and doesn't fit well with the rest of the song, but you changed that already so we'll see what it is like next time.

I'm inspired to finish up the shoegaze/noisegaze song I've been sitting on for the last month now.

Thanks for listening!

I remixed all this track when I was changing the ending so the drums are fixed. About the ending I was aiming for a "wait what?" kind of effect maybe that's why it sounds so out of place, but now is on the "so that's how it is then" side.

I don't upload things often since I tend to change things a lot (there was another one without the drums/rythm guitar and a slower tempo).

Can't wait to hear that song of yours