<Pony>The Fall(Nightmare Moon)

[Thunder Dash]

Here's my latest composition and my first to be put here.

This is a song about the fall of Nightmare Moon, which spins off the Moonlight Sonata.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Rga0oYzpJ4

I would really like some feedback.

It also has lyrics. I haven't have the time to record the lyrics, so here they are.

LYRICS


Verse 1

Days, turned into to months
Months, into years
Years into decades
To centuries and then a millennium

Verse 2

Darkness filled her heart
A clash with the light
A simple request
Turned into a vengeance of fire

Chorus

It was her plan
Spoiled by light
The sun and the moon collide, a fight
For whom shall reign the skies above
The night, shall reign forever more

Verse 3

Twas told the legend
The mare, in the moon
Nightmare moon, she was called
Brought fear and terror in the night

Verse 4

Just a simple request
Rejected by her older sis
Forced herself, unto the throne
Banished to the moon

Chorus

It was her plan
Spoiled by light
The sun and the moon collide, a fight
For whom shall reign the skies above
The night, shall reign forever more

(Spoken)

Elements of Harmony (with an echo effect)
To end the night of terror
Take six
Who are the chosen

(Spoken)

Applejack, you are the one
The one who everypony can trust
You assured Twilight in fear’s eyes
You…represent honesty

Fluttershy, you are the one
The one who can be shy at times
But, you have compassion overloading as you
tamed the beast
You…represent kindness

Pinkie Pie, you are the one
The one who spreads the spirit of joy wherever
you go
You laughed away the fears and in fear’s eye
You…represent laughter

Rarity, you are the one
Despite your love for gems and riches
You gave up your lovely tail to a serpent in
need
You…represent generosity

Rainbow Dash, you are the one
The one everypony can depend on
You stayed with your friends instead of
following your hearts desire
You…represent loyalty

Bridge

And once combined the 5 elements
Produce the one to end it all
The true meaning is that…
Friendship is magic! (hold “magic” for 4 bars)

Chorus (Reprise)

It was her plan
To rule the skies
No longer her great destiny
It was the fall
Of Nightmare Moon!

[Natas_blackmane]

Sounding epic dude loveing the hole feeling and the lyrics keep up the good work.