[pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

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[pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

Postby LutariFan » 09 Feb 2013 12:03

Hello!

So I'm trying to make house music. I'm trying to fit all the house elements in, but since i haven't made house before I am unsure if I missed something :/

I listened to house music and tried to hear what the producers had done, and did my best! :D

So yea, it's not finished yet, but this is the final stage of the WIP. I just feel like I should let someone who's a lot better with music check it out before I release it ^_^

https://soundcloud.com/lutarifan/lutarifan-morning-sun-final

PS: Yes, it's clipping at 1:12. I've fixed that, but too lazy to upload it xD
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Re: [pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

Postby LutariFan » 11 Feb 2013 01:04

Does anybody have an opinion?
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Re: [pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

Postby UnderKeel » 11 Feb 2013 03:42

In my opinion, bass should be with the sidechain too. And quieter.
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Re: [pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

Postby LutariFan » 11 Feb 2013 03:51

UnderKeel wrote:In my opinion, bass should be with the sidechain too. And quieter.

Isn't it already? :shock: Maybe too little sidechaining then xD
Yeah, I'm gonna try to make it sound more, but lower the bass frequencies.
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Re: [pony-inspired][House][WIP]LutariFan - Morning Sun

Postby UnderKeel » 11 Feb 2013 03:58

Your kick is just conflicting with bass, I guess.
Make several basslines: One or two for 170 - 400 Hz, I don't know exactly, and one for the sub-bass (60 - 90 Hz).
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