should I send this to R&R?

[senntenial]

I dunno. It's electro, but I'm not sure if it's "fast"
this is the WIP I have - excuse the shoddy mixing n stuff

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62916279/prohouse3.mp3

whatchu think

[Motivfs]

The theme is suppose to be "fast", but it doesn't need to be, it's just what they mostly want to see, you can definitely send it in though.

I really like how upbeat the melody is though, I think the Vowels however are a little forced, they really take away from the upbeat melody that you've built around. I think something else, or a tweaking of the Vowels to better fit the melody/feeling is required though.

[senntenial]

I don't know what you mean by vowels u_u

[soup2504]

I don't know what you mean by vowels u_u

A, E, I, O, U, and sometimes Y


Also I wouldn't send this to R&R because it's probably not finished. But when you do finish it, then yes please do it

[Motivfs]

I don't know what you mean by vowels u_u

I'm not too into dubstep/electro and stuff like that, but the "YOI'S" then, as I'll call them since I know they're called that, or growls, or whatever haha.

[Raddons]

Oh hell I love it. I would send it in when finished, cause it sounds like it will be a totally stellar track.