<non-pony><original><piano> Galapagos

[Bendelsohn]

Greetings once more, fine gentlemen of MLR! I come to you today which I made in the span of a day, but am rather proud of regardless. I made sure to change the velocities this time, so things aren't always the same volume. Anyways, hope you like it!
Feedback is always appreciated, so don't be afraid to tell me what you think!
https://soundcloud.com/bendelsohn/galapagos

[Ruka]

You should do something about that piano sound. It sounds VERY static. I find a huge lack of flow, although the melody is fine.
And the bassnotes of the piano vst you're using sounds a little broken.

But hey, it's a good start. Just needs some mastering.

[Forza SoundFire]

Ruka, is right. It's a good basis for a piano piece.

Sometimes the best thing to do it to give it to a piano player and record it live either with midi or acoustically.

For now, soak it a bit of reverb. And less compression; it stands out around 1.05+ with the heavy bass harmonies.

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