<Pony><Remix><WIP> Breeze of Hope

[N3pton]

First time with dubstep. Hope you enjoy.
I'm probably never gonna make more dubstep after this. I know that the transitions could need some work but w/e. x3

I changed it to a WIP. I'm going to to more editing after some advice.

https://soundcloud.com/n3pton/oblivia-breeze-of-hope-n3pton

[Genkar]

Okay nice intro, I like the FX used. I like that you didn't just use *kick*snare*, you changed it up. Wait wut. Okay, the drop just kind of mixes in, that's a really sloppy transition. Excellent wubs though. The main melody is really good. Okay, second build up is good. The drop comes in feeling really... not intense though. It's a great drop, but you might want to add a crash on the downbeat to add to the intensity of that first wub.

Everything was great individually, but the transitions like you said definitely need work.

[N3pton]

Thanks for the advice. I'll see if I can do that soon.

:3

[Ptepix]

I was surprised at how well this was mixed for your first time o.O
The dubstep sounds a bit cluttered to me. Though I liked the sounds (some of them sounded Omni-ish WHERE DID YOU GET THEM?? lol)
I actually can't put a finger on why it sounds cluttered to me though. Sorry :/
I like the intro and build. They are perfect...just idk make the wubs less cluttered and it will be perfect!

[Captain Ironhelm]

on the drop I'd switch things up a bit and use switch between different synths instead of just using one just to see what it'd sound like.

[N3pton]

Thanks for advice.
Made V2.

https://soundcloud.com/n3pton/oblivia-breeze-of-hope

[itroitnyah]

Alright, so it's good, but it's not titled properly. The drop doesn't really reflect a breeze of hope. The title would be more fitting for a song like this. However, the cliche BURNS. That "yay" sample is way overused, and it fits in the song context just as much as the title does anyways. Also, I want to know if you synthesized the wubs yourself. In an attempt to boost my ego, I'm assuming no, but feel free to crush my ego any time

[Ptepix]

The first drop is way better! Good job
Still wondering where you got those sounds :3

[N3pton]

Try using the VEC packs.

[Ptepix]

Ah. Haha I use those XD I meant your dubstep synths

[N3pton]

Because I don't completely own all of them I can't give them away.

I took the ones that the owner me and I edited them to my liking. Sorry.

[Ptepix]

Are they in massive?

[N3pton]

Of course.

[Ptepix]

Who did you get the presets from then? I want them XD
Although technically if you modified them they aren't his any more lol

[Ptepix]

Or sorry who did you get them from o.O

[Elmorya]

everything sounds good except for the drop to me. Its way too gritty imo. Id suggest eq-ing some of the bass out of it so that it doesnt take up so much of the mids and lows and maybe compress it differently to take the volume down some too. Also if you could take some of the overall wetness away from the wubs it think itd fit much better with the rest of the track

[N3pton]

Or sorry who did you get them from o.O

The owner of the them doesn't want a million people asking for basses so I have keep quiet.

Also I'll try to EQ the basses some more.

[Ptepix]

Awww -.- lame. Ok

[N3pton]

I just finished the song and I'm gonna put it on youtube and post results tonight.