by Element6 » 29 Jan 2013 17:07
This is nice. It's one of those easy listening songs that provoke a contented feeling.
May I ask who made the original? I couldn't find the name of the original artist anywhere.
Overall, I think the song is composed well. It does seem a bit quiet as a whole though. Have you ever heard of iZotope Ozone? It was suggested to me here on MLR awhile back to help my own songs out, and I love it. Alternatively, if you don't do this already, I was taught to mix songs with the Master Channel set to -20db or so. That has helped out a ton with volume too.
This might just be my own preferences, but I was dying to hear a little more low end, especially during the drop. Like, some sidechained bass or something. Also, around 2:49 I feel like it's a bit too empty, like I'm listening to the acapella. It might need something to keep the momentum. There should be plenty of ways to do that. ^^
But, I really did like it! I hope I'm not being too critical; this is better than what I make. I can only hope that I help out somehow. Like I said, the composition is great. I hope your best friend likes it too. c: