<Pony> <Rap> <Original> Mediocre Brony- Wingpower

[Mediocre Brony]

https://soundcloud.com/mediocrebrony/wingpower

Hello and thanks for giving my work a shot! This is an original pony rap, and I am your conventional pony rap-guy. Any and all feedback is much appreciated because I use that feedback to help me build on what scraps of talent I may have! It's really cool to have such an open system here.
Thanks a bunch!

Also find it here to support my youtubes and such! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wd6UVMam ... e=youtu.be

[Stu Beef]

Let it be known that I am wary of all pony rap. Still, I can get into your lines and your flow ain't too bad. It kinda sounds like you're trying to imitate mos def tho; it just doesn't seem genuine. You should really continue to refine your voice so that it feels more natural and YOU rather than an off impression of somebody else.

[Mediocre Brony]

Thanks for the feedback! One of my hindrances is actually finding my voice, and I am getting better with every song, or so I would have myself believe. Either way a second pair of ears is more helpful than I could ever have imagined, so thanks again!

[bigBerd]

Great use of multis. Your flow and quality are decent, and like they say practice makes perfect. Good beat choice as well. What are your influences?

[Mediocre Brony]

Thanks! As always the feedback is much appreciated and I can always use the pointers on what I am doing good, and what I can do better. And I would say my biggest influences have been the entirety of the Wu-Tang clan, Rakim, KRS-One, Biggie, and The Jurrasic 5 to name a few. Anyway thanks again, and go check out my YouTube channel! It could really use the support haha.