(Pony)(Original) Taking a nap

[N3pton]

This is my second song.
Looking for feedback/things I should improve on in the future.

[FermataWordplA]

The falling white noise that goes from 0:15 is a bit much considering the toned down mood of the song at that exact moment. A less colorful (as in actually less color) would be more suitable, I feel.

The claps that start 1:32ish feel a bit weak. I mean, I get that you don't want especially strong claps given the general mood of the song, but they're just so airy now, I almost feel like they don't need to be there, but of course they're there to change it up. A bit more character would be nice on them, give them a bit more reverb or layer it with something with a bit more tail or crack or something.

Just two minor nitpicks. Overall the song isn't my thing, but I don't think there was anything really inherently wrong in the production.

[N3pton]

I'll try to do that more with my next song.
thanks