<pony><Rainbow Rooted><WIP> Untitled WIP

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<pony><Rainbow Rooted><WIP> Untitled WIP

Postby Ptepix » 26 Jan 2013 16:33

I posted the first version of this already...but I thought I would update the title since it is now a pony related song. Gonna try and get some more pony samples in there if I can figure out good ways to do so.

https://soundcloud.com/ptepix/rainbow-rooted-wip
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Postby Genkar » 26 Jan 2013 16:42

A beautiful example of drum and bass. This is pretty awesome. You have a nice buildup, and a sweet drop to complete it. You have some really sick sounds in here, and the finished product is probably going to sound awesome. The measure of silence before the second drop is nice, adds to the suspense. Overall really good, and at where it is right now, 8/10.
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Postby Ptepix » 26 Jan 2013 16:43

Well wow thanks :D
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Postby Ptepix » 26 Jan 2013 16:51

Thanks :D and yes those are dem Rina samples! :lol:
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Postby Motivfs » 26 Jan 2013 17:43

I enjoyed the start and the buildup alot, I think that's all in well place, I think there might be too much high end though, I don't know if it's just me but I can REALLY feel that high end and it's somewhat overwhelming.

Other than that, I like it quite alot, the only other thing I would do is the give the kicks a tiny bit more punch, but I don't think it's that big of an issue.
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Postby Sonarch » 28 Jan 2013 16:04

Oh yes, this is sounding really legit. Definitely RR stuff right here. I can't even think of anything else to suggest that you do to it.
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Postby Quix » 28 Jan 2013 16:22

Motivfs wrote:I enjoyed the start and the buildup alot, I think that's all in well place, I think there might be too much high end though, I don't know if it's just me but I can REALLY feel that high end and it's somewhat overwhelming.

Other than that, I like it quite alot, the only other thing I would do is the give the kicks a tiny bit more punch, but I don't think it's that big of an issue.

I absolutely agree on both of these points. The mix is way too skewed towards the high end right now and the drums lack punch.
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Postby Ptepix » 28 Jan 2013 16:27

What kind of headphones are you listening on? I use producer level headphones and the kicks are mixed at the same bass level as like...Skrillex or anything really. I'm confused. I will definitely work on the highs though (I don't hear it but I'll check with other headphones)
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Postby Motivfs » 28 Jan 2013 21:01

To clarify, I use Bose QC15's, not too sure where they stand in the producer world but they usually work quite well for me (Although I had them before I produced)

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Postby Ptepix » 29 Jan 2013 00:52

Hmmm ok. Cool stuff. Yeah I heard those issues when I listened on my earbuds. Fixed lol :D
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Postby Ptepix » 29 Jan 2013 09:51

Ok updated version of this song...a lot of said issues SHOULD be fixed :D

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75980821/DnDub.mp3
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Postby Motivfs » 29 Jan 2013 22:30

Oh my god, so much better, before, the high end actually made my ears ring to the point of discomfort, this is alot better than before! Also that kick has a nice little more tad of punch in it now, so I have nothing else to critique on.

Good luck on the contest!
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Postby Ptepix » 30 Jan 2013 01:37

Ah cool :3...what contest?
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Postby Motivfs » 30 Jan 2013 01:43

You & making it for Rainbow & Rooted of course!
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Postby Ptepix » 30 Jan 2013 02:13

Right...I didn't know R&R was a contest XD :D lol jk
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Postby Sonarch » 30 Jan 2013 13:43

It's a contest?
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Postby Ptepix » 30 Jan 2013 16:13

I don't think so. I think it is just whether or not your track is quality enough lol
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Postby Sonarch » 30 Jan 2013 16:19

Ah. Well personally I think you've got it with this one.
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Postby Ptepix » 30 Jan 2013 16:21

Well thanks :D
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