<Pony><Original> "PONI" (Electrohouse)

[Ptepix]

Hello! I'm new here...and have never used a forum in my life. Hopefully I'm doing this right XD
Just thought I would post a song and ask how one would submit to Rainbow Rooted? Thanks

Pump Out the Noise Initiative
http://youtu.be/pFg6wR3csGo

[CommandSpry]

It's not a bad tune, although a bit cluttered

[Ptepix]

Yeah? Any tips or places where it is cluttered?

[Freewave]

Just a quick question and I'm sorry if you're doing it all properly already; you're not putting a limiter on your master when you do your unmastered render are you? There's a few sections that seem squashed where it sounds like you might. If not then look at panning or eq'ing your instruments a little better to give it a bit wider and more varied sound. If you aren't doing that then they're all centered, all vying for EQ attention, and trying to stand out from each other. It's not suffering too bad so hopefully you're doing some of that already. It's just hard to know what techniques people already know and what they don't.

It's a good track otherwise (some good synths and structure) although personally i like a little more mlp influence in a PONI track, some more samples or a point of the song (what's the motivation? who's it about? what's it about?) otherwise then it's more PINO (pony in name only).

Anyway welcome to the forum, glad you found us.

[Ptepix]

Just a quick question and I'm sorry if you're doing it all properly already; you're not putting a limiter on your master when you do your unmastered render are you? There's a few sections that seem squashed where it sounds like you might. If not then look at panning or eq'ing your instruments a little better to give it a bit wider and more varied sound. If you aren't doing that then they're all centered, all vying for EQ attention, and trying to stand out from each other. It's not suffering too bad so hopefully you're doing some of that already. It's just hard to know what techniques people already know and what they don't.

It's a good track otherwise (some good synths and structure) although personally i like a little more mlp influence in a PONI track, some more samples or a point of the song (what's the motivation? who's it about? what's it about?) otherwise then it's more PINO (pony in name only).

Anyway welcome to the forum, glad you found us.

Yeah...I do put a limiter on the master (don't shoot me lol). I know how to properly mix it all and slightly offset the sounds in the mixer tracks...its just me being slightly lazy lol. But I did offset different tracks in this one in particular...but there is still a limiter on the master

Yeah originally it was supposed to be an idea where I got a bunch of people together and made a pony album. I thought the whole Balloon Party thing was disbanded lawl XD

Thanks for reviewing