<Pony><Remix> Silva Hound - Hooves Up High (Motivfs Remix)

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<Pony><Remix> Silva Hound - Hooves Up High (Motivfs Remix)

Postby Motivfs » 20 Jan 2013 05:20



Any feedback is appreciated, critique as hard as you want to, I love it all and only want to improve.
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Re: <Pony><Remix> Silva Hound - Hooves Up High (Motivfs Remi

Postby Conduit » 21 Jan 2013 14:20

Quick critique:
-The chordy synth at the beginning is a bit quiet, and seems to be in the same range as the vocals, eq would be good.
-At around 1:30 some subbass would be nice, as well as more bass in general. Your lead sounds great, but its a little weak without something to back it up.
-Vocal glitches at 2:20 are amazing
-Your snare is a bit overpowering, particularly near the end of the song.

Nice song though, I'm definitely subbing
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Re: <Pony><Remix> Silva Hound - Hooves Up High (Motivfs Remi

Postby nOk » 21 Jan 2013 17:13

The high-hats at the beginning is a bit loud, but other than that, it's well done overall :D
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Re: <Pony><Remix> Silva Hound - Hooves Up High (Motivfs Remi

Postby Motivfs » 21 Jan 2013 20:05

Thanks for the feedback guys! Yeah, I felt the snare was definitely powerful, that was my main intention in the song, maybe I went a little too far with it? hehe.

Yeah, I felt that the bass was there, but I can understand where it was lacking, my lead bass was a bit higher up than usual for me, maybe next time I should layer it with something stronger in the 100-250hz range. The subbass was quite subtle as well, and I realized that, I'm still trying to work on making better subbass' however, so it's good to know where I stand with that.

And thanks for the vocal glitch complement, that's my first time ever glitching vocals, I actually really liked the sound of it too, and was definitely my favourite part of this piece, I felt it was the strongest as well, maybe something to build from!

As for the highhats, I can understand that they might be overpowering as I probably didn't mix them properly before any synths/other percussion came in at the start, so I can see why they might be too loud.

Thank you both for the feedback, greatly appreciated!
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