(PONY)(ELECTRONIC ORCHESTRAL) Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons

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Re: (PONY)(ELECTRONIC ORCHESTRAL) Kyoga - Of Greater Horizon

Postby Conduit » 21 Jan 2013 14:14

You didn't ask for critique, but I'll give a little bit anyway.
-When the drums come in they over power everything else, but on the upside, you have beautiful percussion samples, mind sharing where you got them or what library they are?
-The clicking type noise that's part of the rhythm guitar gets a bit annoying at parts.

Other then that this is amazing, the percussion is epic, and the little bit of electronic music in there like the filter sweeps really tie it together. :D
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Re: (PONY)(ELECTRONIC ORCHESTRAL) Kyoga - Of Greater Horizon

Postby Conduit » 21 Jan 2013 16:42

That would be great, if its not too big of a pain for you.
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Re: (PONY)(ELECTRONIC ORCHESTRAL) Kyoga - Of Greater Horizon

Postby Freewave » 26 Jan 2013 08:52

I like the melodies a lot and it's got great atmosphere. I'll be honest and say it feels a little incomplete like you could have added some other elements and structural changes to make it that much more epic. I saw that you've been doing vocals for 5 years, had you given any thought to adding words and adding vocals to a track such as this? That would have been really cool and added quite a bit to it IMHO.

Honestly if you ever want a remix I'd love to throw my spin on it, if that holds any interest. This track seems like it would be a good fit if you want to try something different with it...
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