[Pony-House][WIP] Rainbows n Stuff

[N3pton]

Looking for advice on my current WIP of my house song.

I must of cut it off at the end. oops

https://soundcloud.com/n3pton/rainbows-n-stuff-wip

[Penumbrah]

Nice job! Kick sounds nice and strong and I'm digging the melody. Really the only two things that I personally think could improve it a little would be your bass line and that little airy voice sounding pad you have that comes in around 1:32. The bass line that comes in at 0:16 is cool, but it sounds a little sudden for my taste if that makes any sense. Maybe turning it down slightly would fix that, or you could try a low pass filter and gradually increase the frequency in those 8 bars. It would give it a bit more atmosphere too. Second, the voice-y pad just seems a bit out of place. I would recommend maybe cutting out more of the lower frequencies a bit or sidechaining it like the white noise just a little.

That's just my two cents, but like i said, love it so far and hope to hear more from you!