hmmm dis song you got here is mighty interesting.
let meh start wif teh intros. i kinda like it to be honest though it isn't making me go crazy over it. i normally dont like songs with entire sentences and what not in songs but the speeding up of it and rhythm was cool

then at 0:23, the notes kinda started to clash and become a bit chaotic.
and at 0:53, lol i caught that
the synths are pretty cool at around 1:00
ill be honest this song sounds a bit messy to me with all the notes being diminished (i think, or at least a lot of half steps) but i think thats just a personal preference i have. i tend to steer away from diminished chords and such.