[Pony][Original][Emotional] Haunted

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[Pony][Original][Emotional] Haunted

Postby AndrewClocksin » 04 Jan 2013 12:20



This is a quick song I made to get in the mood for writing dark/orchestral-ish pieces, because I've been enlisted to score a grimdark fanfic project. As always, let me know your thoughts, and subscribe for more if you like it!
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Re: [Pony][Original][Emotional] Haunted

Postby Symphon » 04 Jan 2013 13:09

The mood in this one is definitely strong and gives that instant feeling of some despair going on. The 8-bitish synths with the strings go along surprisingly well, and the general output of the track is solid. The voice-type thing near 1:30 is beautiful along with everything else. The only thing that feels out of place is when the kick drum starts. It feels a bit weird with everything else going on. Otherwise, the song is really good. Nice job.
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Re: [Pony][Original][Emotional] Haunted

Postby AndrewClocksin » 04 Jan 2013 19:48

TunerSymphon wrote:The mood in this one is definitely strong and gives that instant feeling of some despair going on. The 8-bitish synths with the strings go along surprisingly well, and the general output of the track is solid. The voice-type thing near 1:30 is beautiful along with everything else. The only thing that feels out of place is when the kick drum starts. It feels a bit weird with everything else going on. Otherwise, the song is really good. Nice job.


Thanks for the detailed feedback. :)

Interesting about how you thought the beginning of the section with drums seemed out of place, I'll take a look at that and see if I can notice what you're talking about.

I really appreciate your critique, thank you!
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