<Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

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<Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby GumsOfGabby » 14 Dec 2012 10:28

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Small WIP, soon to add vocals and everything else. Just in need of some opinions on the mix and whether the swing is suitable or over the top.

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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby Pewter Robot » 14 Dec 2012 14:53

That title. That title looks weird.
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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby randomblockfilms » 16 Dec 2012 09:34

yeahhhH!!! love the drums n stuff! :D very very clean n crisp! and that synth iz mighty fine to! though i think what would make this better is more synths n stuff. like different synths coming in and out. but not too many as it might steer you away from your oridgonal idea.
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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby Nine Volt » 16 Dec 2012 14:45

Nice drum work :3

That ride towards the end seems a bit quiet though. I take it this is in its early stages?
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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby Pewter Robot » 16 Dec 2012 18:47

Really nice drums, but it's pretty repetitive and it's pretty quiet and empty. The transitions also need some work.
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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby GumsOfGabby » 17 Dec 2012 03:16

randomblockfilms wrote:yeahhhH!!! love the drums n stuff! :D very very clean n crisp! and that synth iz mighty fine to! though i think what would make this better is more synths n stuff. like different synths coming in and out. but not too many as it might steer you away from your oridgonal idea.

Thanks for the feedback and the idea! Adding in some more stuff now!

Nine Volt wrote:Nice drum work :3

That ride towards the end seems a bit quiet though. I take it this is in its early stages?

Thanks for noticing! Fixed up the ride. I wouldn't say early (30+ hours already lol), but it is still a draft.

Pewter Robot wrote:Really nice drums, but it's pretty repetitive and it's pretty quiet and empty. The transitions also need some work.

Thanks for your feedback. I think I'm going to keep the repetition to hold the suspense for a new chord progression in the build up. Working on those transitions!

Thanks again guys! :)
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Re: <Soon-to-be-pony><Original><WIP> Ford Mustang

Postby Pewter Robot » 17 Dec 2012 14:33

randomblockfilms wrote:yeahhhH!!! love the drums n stuff! :D very very clean n crisp! and that synth iz mighty fine to! though i think what would make this better is more synths n stuff. like different synths coming in and out. but not too many as it might steer you away from your oridgonal idea.

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