<original><pony><tech-trance> Snow on Your Vinyl

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<original><pony><tech-trance> Snow on Your Vinyl

Postby UnderKeel » 13 Dec 2012 07:26

Well, till winter holidays still two weeks, but I think it's not wrong to share some music related to this ;)
Actually this track reflect all my skills in mixing/mastering, so if You have anything to say about this - I want to hear.
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Re: <original><pony><tech-trance> Snow on Your Vinyl

Postby randomblockfilms » 14 Dec 2012 15:13

interesting sounds you got going on here. i hears a lot of diminished and minor chords. well i think i do. sounds maybe a bit chaotic at 3:00 then at 3:26 some of the notes clash with each other and sound a bit more chaotic. Sounds great if thats what you're goin' for cause it sounds like some sort of boss battle deep beneath the ground.

i dunno. thats just what comes to mind when i hear it. :P

but mixing and mastering wise i think it sound pretty good. i don't notice anything wrong that stands out. though i am not very good at mastering and mixing my self zoo yeah i might not be much help. :(

and also the words in yo vid. THEY MOVE
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Re: <original><pony><tech-trance> Snow on Your Vinyl

Postby UnderKeel » 14 Dec 2012 21:54

Thanks for your commenting :) .

randomblockfilms wrote:Sounds great if thats what you're goin' for cause it sounds like some sort of boss battle deep beneath the ground.

Just it was made randomly. This pads, for example, not very well suited to the overall theme song.
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Re: <original><pony><tech-trance> Snow on Your Vinyl

Postby ph00tbag » 16 Dec 2012 22:24

I'm going to be honest, I'm having trouble enjoying the track from a musical perspective. There doesn't seem to be a cohesive theme to the track, and tonally, it just seems to wander through whatever modal territory it pleases on a whim, and it sounds like you just recorded yourself mashing up and down your keyboard randomly with your index fingers. You can't just put a bunch of random notes together and call it tech trance. You still need some thematic consistency.

Production-wise, the track is definitely solid, though, so kudos on that.
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