<original> <nonpony> Daze

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<original> <nonpony> Daze

Postby Quix » 05 Dec 2012 15:07



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Re: <original> <nonpony> Daze

Postby randomblockfilms » 05 Dec 2012 21:19

ooooh dem synths n stuff be mighty fine i reckon :D! though the kick is kinda strange. doesnt sound like it has any low end to it. did you intend it to be that way? sounds intresting but with this kind of style of song i think you might want some bassness to it. especially in teh kick
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Re: <original> <nonpony> Daze

Postby Quix » 05 Dec 2012 21:47

Yeah, I kind of intended for the kick to sound somewhat high-passed, but I think I went a little overboard. I'll definitely be keeping some more low end in my kicks from now on. Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: <original> <nonpony> Daze

Postby Raddons » 05 Dec 2012 22:02

Yeah, the kick is pretty annoying without the low end actually. Maybe I'm not too well suited with the genre though.

Only complaint apart from that is the outro. It's pretty much not there. I think something simple would have been beneficial, like a white noise sweep or something.
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