<trance><Dutch house><Pony><Critique?> Requested thing

[Nonsense_Profile]

So, this thing is supposed to be an "art of the dress" remix, but the more I actually work on it, the less I want it to be pony, just a normal house song.

so tell me why this shitty song suck's, please?

https://soundcloud.com/ridium_music/mori-pulchre-wip-mode

[DijiTwitch]

The sounds are cool, but it sounds like the beat could use a bit more variation. It gets pretty repetitive past the one minute mark. Like, more percussion mainly. I'm not saying that cool little melody you got either, but add something else behind it, some syncopated something. Maybe some pads? The spectrum sounds a bit barren at some points too.
Really awesome sounds, it just feels like the song could use more stuff going on in it.