<pony><remix><house> Twistrike

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<pony><remix><house> Twistrike

Postby soup2504 » 03 Dec 2012 14:37


http://soundcloud.com/soup2504/artattack-twistrike-soupcan

So yeah. I finally got around to finishing this. It took me way longer than it should've, but whatever. I guess I'm sort of proud of it.
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Re: <pony><remix><house> Twistrike

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 03 Dec 2012 14:52

Some feedback:

The piano could use a little bit more reverb or delay. It sounds a bit dry and could use some more space. Also the part at 1:22 confuses me a little bit because it sounds like a build up after the build up. The vocals at 1:37 sound out of tune. Maybe more shimmer/air/high end/whatever on the rythmic part that comes in at 3:18?
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Re: <pony><remix><house> Twistrike

Postby soup2504 » 03 Dec 2012 17:34

Gnarrkhaz wrote:Some feedback:

The piano could use a little bit more reverb or delay. It sounds a bit dry and could use some more space. Also the part at 1:22 confuses me a little bit because it sounds like a build up after the build up. The vocals at 1:37 sound out of tune. Maybe more shimmer/air/high end/whatever on the rythmic part that comes in at 3:18?


I was actually going to put reverb on the piano, but I ended up not doing it because I didn't feel like it (I know it sounds stupid, but I tend to do stuff like that a lot, and it makes sense to me because there's something else to it??). I don't really see how you think 1:22 sounds like a build up, though.

Anyways, thanks! :>
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Re: <pony><remix><house> Twistrike

Postby Kushy Kallous » 04 Dec 2012 10:54

The part at 1:22 works really well.
I dont usually like house,
But this is a pretty awesome remix with it's energy.
Good job Soupcan : )
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Re: <pony><remix><house> Twistrike

Postby soup2504 » 04 Dec 2012 20:56

Kushy Kallous wrote:The part at 1:22 works really well.
I dont usually like house,
But this is a pretty awesome remix with it's energy.
Good job Soupcan : )


Well, I guess I did something right, then.

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