<Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

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<Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby FadedSilhouette » 02 Dec 2012 16:05

http://soundcloud.com/faded-silhouette/beyond-her-garden-remix-wip

It appears as though pretty much every remix of this song was made like a year ago but whatever. I was listening to a random playlist on Youtube and this song came on and I was like ERMEGERD MUST REMIX! Seven hours later this was the result. Now it's not complete yet, there's still a handfull of things I'd like to do to it, but I'd like some opinions on it so far being that the only outside opinion so far is my brother and, even though he hates MLP, he said it was awesome. So, I would like the opinions of other musicians 'cause they would provide a little more criticism than my brother would. Also if someone would like to do visuals for the completed track that would be totally awesome.
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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby itroitnyah » 02 Dec 2012 20:25

The synths could definitely use some work. That is all
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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby FadedSilhouette » 03 Dec 2012 00:34

Do you have any suggestions on how I could improve them 'cause the way they are now is kinda how I intended them to sound :(
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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 03 Dec 2012 01:04

I actually like it. It sound's like something for an arena, vocal's could use a bit of work with syncing, and maybe bring the bring the higher frequencies on both the synth's and vocal's

Also maybe amplify the everything around the 15.88 kHz frequency up anywhere from 1.85 to around 2.75 decibel's, it will make the synth.... "Sound" I guess, pop out more.

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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby FadedSilhouette » 03 Dec 2012 02:56

I know the vocals sound a bit off but it seems they were recorded that way. I don't know, mayby I just suck at vocal syncing. I've got them synced the best I can so I guess that will have to do.
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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby Raddons » 03 Dec 2012 04:51

It really sounds like you used the MIDI heavily. Lots of replacing instead of recreating. The whole thing seems to be lacking high end, while the low end is pretty muddy for me.
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Re: <Pony><Remix><WIP> Beyond Her Garden Remix

Postby itroitnyah » 03 Dec 2012 21:41

FadedSilhouette wrote:Do you have any suggestions on how I could improve them 'cause the way they are now is kinda how I intended them to sound :(
Well, I'm not telling you to change them, lol. The synths do fit, they could just be better made (which makes me sound like I'm tearing your song apart and trying to destroy it. Relax, I'm not). I'm not exactly what I would say or have to offer in terms of tips or how you could improve them, since I'm not actually the best at synth design myself :lol: the phrase "easier said than done" is relevant here
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