<Pony><Original> Darkness inside my Soul - Starcrossed

[Starcrossed]

So it's better, but still not at the point I want it. I think the real problem this time is my recording technique but it's getting there. Anyway, hope you like it - if you don't do say why since that helps in the future.

http://soundcloud.com/starcrossedbrony/darkness-inside-my-soul

See youtube description for lyrics.
Youtube link: http://youtu.be/1PEzU-6bYyA

C&C is both appreciated and highly wanted so if you've got some thoughts feel free to share them.

Regards
Starcrossed.